Today I have finished my PowerPoint presentation that I started during the half term I have also presented it to are teacher Stewart. I think that my PowerPoint was detailed and had many images on with a good balance of text and images. I think I could have been more clear when speaking about my ideas and PowerPoint as I was nervous however I spoke at the right speed and got good feed back.
feedback from teacher and peer:



grade criteria: (my target is a merit)

